A “tell” in poker is a subtle clue by which a player unintentionally communicates something about his or her hand. Telling is not good in a poker game, nor is it good in fiction. A recent discovery reminded me just how potent not telling can be.
I’d heard her name over the years but had never read her work: Nadine Gordimer.
Total shame on me, considering that she was the 1991 winner of the Nobel Prize for literature. The list of her other awards takes up more than a full computer screen. How, as a writer of serious fiction, could I have overlooked her?
I won’t even bother to make excuses.
Thankfully there is no penalty for late discovery of a literary treasure, only eagerness and the blossoming anticipation of looking forward to reading her numerous short stories and novels.
I have writer Tessa Hadley, author of a recent short story in the New Yorker, to thank for my discovery. She chose Gordimer’s story “City Lovers,” which originally appeared in the New Yorker on October 13, 1975, to read on a recent New Yorker fiction podcast.
Listening to Hadley read the story as I took a walk, I was transported from suburban California to a very different suburbia: the South Africa of the 1970s, where an Austrian geologist, Dr. Franz-Josef von Leinsdorf, lives in a “three-room flat in a suburban block with a landscaped central garden.”
Von Leinsdorf meets and becomes involved with—I hesitate to say falls in love with, though love may figure into the equation—a “Colored girl cashier.” Their affair, when enclosed within the walls of the flat, almost manages to transcend their roles. When the world outside intrudes, the consequences are frightful. (You can read a summary of the story here.)
If ever there were an inspiring example for writers of “show, don’t tell,” this is it. The story is full of moral outrage—Gordimer skewers South Africa’s system of apartheid and then zooms out to reveal that racism and classism are manifest around the world—yet never preaches. The relationship between the two characters, not the author’s desire to make a statement, drives the story. And, while Gordimer reveals all the nuances of her characters, her prose is never showy. The voice is matter-of-fact and all the more powerful for its simplicity.
If you have a spare hour, I highly recommend listening to the podcast, which includes a conversation about the story between Tessa Hadley and New Yorker fiction editor Deborah Triesman. The podcast is free to download. Or, if you’re a subscriber, visit the magazine’s archives (though I had some technical difficulties accessing the archives even as a subscriber).
Have you discovered (or rediscovered) a writer who reminded you of a very important aspect of your craft?
I’d never heard of her. Though she sounds exceptional. 🙂 At a recent conference, a speaker explained to us, readers read to have an emotional experience. If you tell them someone was unhappy, they don’t experience it. But if you show them, they get what they paid for. 🙂
I just started one of her novels. It’s not nearly as tightly written, which is somewhat to be expected of a novel. But it’s also one of her later ones, written probably 30 years or so after the short story. I’ll be interested to see how the whole book affects me.
I didn’t recognize this author either (though I suspect that doesn’t surprise you…) Sounds like a great piece.
By the way, can you send me an email (firstname.lastname@example.org) on whether you’d like to receive a signed copy of my book or not, since you were one of the first seven reviewers? If you’re trying to lighten your bookshelves and want to pass it onto someone else, that’s fine, too. Just let me know. I’ll need your address if you’d like to receive one 🙂
I’ve never heard of this writer, either, Audrey, but I’m really curious about her now. I adore subtlety in writing and am intrigued your description of the effect hers had on you.
Finding a new author, especially one who was there all along, but unknown to us, is such fun. It makes me want to investigate that person and their work and read everything they’ve ever written.
So glad I could introduce you to her! One of her novels is definitely next on my “To read” list. I’ll be interested to see if the impression from her story holds true.
This is wonderful! I can’t wait to listen to the podcast. The writer whose craft I admire is Joan Didion.
Hope you enjoy it. Joan Didion is definitely to be admired.