Surprise, gratitude, and relief came to visit when I saw that Kourtney Heintz had tagged me to participate in The Next Big Thing.
I’ve been working on a blog post for several days that hasn’t come together yet. How much less stressful to answer a set of structured questions about my work-in-progress and pass the torch to five other writers*.
So here goes.
What is the title of your Work in Progress?
Sotto Voce. This is a working title. I realize some people may need the definition of “sotto voce,” which means the title violates at least one rule of titling (make it instantly communicate the essence of your book). I also have a working subtitle—“A Memoir of Love, Loss, and Regret”—which is confusing since it’s a novel. But it’s a novel in the form of a memoir. Suffice it to say, I will figure these things out before launch!
Where did the idea come from for the book?
I took my son snowboarding a couple of years ago. Waiting in the lodge while he was on the slopes, I struck up a conversation with another mom waiting for her family. She told me way more than she might have intended—about her son’s time in rehab, her dysfunctional marriage, and her job loss. I kept thinking, “But she looks so ordinary!” It got me thinking about how we all have hidden stories and how our exterior selves are often so different from our interior selves.
What genre does your book fall under?
When I started, I thought it was literary fiction. Now I think it might be contemporary women’s fiction with a literary flavor.
Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
That’s a challenge. Since the book spans 50 years, it contains both young and old versions of the characters. Also, it’s an ensemble work: six characters each take turns telling their stories. But for two of the characters, I’d pick Edward Norton, because he plays disturbed so well, and Sarah Polley, because, according to IMDB, “Polley has become a favorite of critics for her sensitive portraits of wounded and conflicted young women in independent films.”
What is a one-sentence synopsis of the book?
A young man holding his mother at gunpoint—in a misguided attempt to convince her to listen to him—learns more than he bargained for about his past.
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
I don’t know yet.
How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?
About nine months. It took me another six to edit; it’s now out with the first round of beta readers.
What other books would you compare this story to in your genre?
In form, it’s a bit like Jennifer Egan’s A Visit From the Goon Squad (comingling story lines, with each chapter intended to be capable of standing alone as a short story). In theme and tone it’s a bit like Elizabeth Strout’s Amy and Isabelle.
Who or what inspired you to write this book?
My parents and my children. My parents are gone but I continue to feel their influence on my life. My children have only begun to evolve into the adults they’ll become, yet I fret constantly over their evolution. Writing a book about the complicated relationships between parents and children seemed like a good outlet to channel my anxieties so I wouldn’t overwhelm my flesh-and-blood offspring. That said, if either of them ever do anything as stupid as some of my characters, I’ll wring their necks!
What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
Although the story takes place in venues and times I’m familiar with (New York state in the 1970s and present-day California), I did a lot of research. One of the characters, a Vietnam vet, came to me begging to be in the story. Since I am not a man and did not serve in Vietnam, I had to work to capture his voice and his story. But isn’t that what writers do?
Passing the Torch
*The writers I’d love to hear from about their Next Big Thing (with absolutely no expectation of participation unless it feels right) are:
- Rohini Gupta (I stumbled across Gupta’s story “A Muse’s Tale” on Everyday Fiction, and was intrigued.)
- Tracey Baptiste
- Lena Roy (sorry, I don’t know how to put the accent over the “e” in WordPress!)
- Daniel R. Davis
- and of course… Carrie Rubin (how could I not?)
Thanks so much for tagging me, Audrey. I actually was tagged in this before and totally forgot to participate. Oops! This is what happens when you have a full time job, freelance, and have children, I guess. Whew. Since I’ve now been tagged twice, I think I have to do it! I’ll get on that this week (at least I’ll try!)
No hurry and no pressure… but obviously the world is interested in your work!
Your life sounds a lot like mine (minus the full-time job–I have several part-time ones instead 🙂 ).
Hey, thanks for the tag. For some reason there was an email fail and I just saw the message. I’ll see what I can come up with. 🙂
No hurry—I look forward to it when you get a chance.
Thank you for tagging me, Audrey.
I am quite willing to share – how does it work?
Best of luck finishing your novel and look forward to reading it. It sounds very interesting.
All you do is answer the questions about your work in progress in a blog post, then identify five other writers you’d like to hear from about their works in progress, and let them know. Sorry, I should have put more details about the process in my post.
I look forward to hearing about what you’re working on!
Really enjoyed reading and learning more about you.
Book sounds great ( and you do so well at expressing thoughts concisely – a little envious of that)
I have no doubt the perfect title will appear.
Thank you! I can be a little more long-winded in novel format, but one of my goals for the current work is to edit it really tightly. So, we’ll see!
Wow, your novel sounds amazing, Audrey. I like the title, but yeah, there might be issues with folks not immediately knowing what it means. Still, it’s very cool.
I just love Edward Norton – he’s a fabulous actor. He morphs with every character he plays, from Fight Club to The Painted Veil, such range.
Good luck with the beta reads!
Thanks – it’s a leap of faith to put it out there, as I’m sure every writer knows.
Glad my tag was so well timed!
I love your premise. Hope your betas get back to you soon. This sounds fabulous!
And it always amazes me what people will confide to strangers. 🙂
Sounds like a great premise, Audrey. I look forward to reading it. Good luck with the writing. And thanks for the tag! I’ve been bad–I’ve been tagged several times and I keep putting it off. I’m not sure why, but I’m so private when it comes to my WIP. I’m weird that way. 🙂
No apologies needed! I didn’t feel ready to reveal anything (other than that I was working on something) until now. So no worries.
…and not talking about it is a great way to build suspense and anticipation!
Sounds so exciting, can’t wait to read it. 🙂
Thanks – I hope you don’t have to wait too long 🙂